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Review:elegantphoenix says:
I'll admit, I was wondering a bit about there being a Dramione pairing somewhere along the way, but I'm proud to say that I'm not upset in the least about there not being one. It's sort of refreshing, I think, for them to coexist in the same story without there being any romantic interactions between them. I thought she was a very believable character here, in that she was very serious about her job. I think that, even if I hadn't read the cast list at the beginning, I would have known she was standing behind Brant because of the line: "I believe immolated is the proper term..." It seemed like such a Hermione-thing to say!

I really liked Draco here. He seemed very inwardly emotional, but still very tough on the outside. He was also very realistic and believable for me. The bit with Libby was very cute; she was genuinely concerned for him, and I liked how she would always come and care for him whenever he woke up in the middle of the night.

Anyway, I really believe that this story is off to a great start! It truly is difficult to write a sequel, but I think you're doing a good job! :) I'll look out for the next chapter!

10/10

Author's Response: Hi elegantphoenix!
Thank you so much for the thoughtful feedback! And yes, there will be no Dramione in this fic. I sort of felt the need to post that particular disclaimer in the last chapter because most readers seem to pull for Draco/Hermione. Their interaction in this fic, however, will be on a strictly sympathetic basis. Hermione is very sensitive when it comes to matters of justice and she realizes that Draco is being turned into a scapegoat, which, despite their childhood rivalry, upsets her.

Also, I'm so thrilled to hear that enjoyed Draco's characterization in this chapter. You're right about his personality--tough on the outside, damaged on the inside.

Again, thanks for the awesome review! It was wonderful hearing from you. The next chapter is in the works and should be posted soon. Take care and be well!

Best,
celticbard


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