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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
This was another marvelous chapter, Sami! I really like how you're moving this along in the stream of conscience that kicked it off in the first chapter. You have a consistent style that carries the reader along as through they were experiencing the story right there with the characters; I could feel Fleur's anger and defiance as she attempted to stand in Dean and Luna's path to block them from leaving for Hogwarts to fight, right up to her resolve and reveling to Bill that they had to go and fight, too. I've already said (wrote) it but I'll say (write) it again, I love the way you're writing Bill and Fleur together and their chemistry for one another. It's more than just love, but also friendship and mutual understanding (if that makes sense). They work well together. Over all, great writing so far and feel free to come re-request again if you'd like. 10/10

Author's Response: I don't think I can thank you enough, Leslie! Consistency has never been a strong point for me, so it means a lot to hear (see?) that. I was actually kind of hoping Bill and Fleur's relationship might come off that way. She needs him in every way, and he needs to feel like there's someone he's providing for (I totally failed in explaining that, but WHATEVER). So they have that relationship that's got friendship aspects as well as love.

I might just take you up on that once I've got chapter five finished and posted!

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