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Review:long_live_luna_bellatrix says:
Oh my goodness, this was amazing! I just stumbled upon this in the story seekers thread and I'm so glad I did. You got the voice just right, I think; old friends, a little harried, wistful, reminiscent... Hermione always was the one that tried to keep their little trio together. This was just heart wrenching. I probably figured out about halfway through that Harry was dead in this story... It was "you shouldn't have gone first" that clued me in. It really did sound like Hermione talking to Harry. Let me guess; she was in the Godric's Hollow cemetery, standing where they stood together in DH, right?

Well I'm rambling, and I've taken off my reviewer hat; when it's a requested review, I try to find CC even in the best story. But now all I can do is ramble. Oh well. Either way, this was a great one shot, it had lots of character. It's certainly going on my favorites.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! And I didn't know my story was nominated for Story Seekers, so it's a double surprise here! Writing an older Hermione was certainly tricky...she had to be jaded, while still sounding like the fussy, bossy Hermione of the past.

And yes, that is exactly where I imagined it to be! However did you guess? :) I always pictured Harry, when buried, would be beside his parents.

Thank you for reading and for reviewing! ^___^ It means a lot!


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