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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Hey Sami, back to review ch. 2. I thought you started this chapter off quite nicely with how Fleur felt initially about Bill's face being scarred at the end of HBP. It showed the deeper side of her that you're trying to get across to your readers; also, I like how easily you write her stream of thoughts as it truly seems in-character for her.

Characterisation: You've portrayed Luna well from how she's perceived in the books. She's intelligent, yet eccentric in the things she believes that her father has told her were real. And the way you've draw up the relationship of Bill and Fleur in this chapter was sweet and showed the chemistry between the married couple.

Plot: Nice job moving this along in Fleur's thoughts and what she thinks about it all. I like how she worries about the trio regardless of feeling that they'll be alright in the end, knowing that they will succeed in whatever they had been planning to do. Over all, great writing. XD

Author's Response: I swear, Luna is the most difficult character ever. It's so hard to make her not too OTT, but then you also have to keep in mind that she does say weird things a lot, and it's just... eurgh. :P

There was a quote somewhere in DH where Fleur told Harry he was safe there and that he shouldn't leave, which is where that thought sparked off, that she might worry about them.

Thank you again for reviewing, darling!

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