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Review:littlephoenix says:
First of all, let me just say that your story here really drew me in from the first chapter when we met Anna. You weaved in each scene brilliantly, and I loved the little twist with Anna and Edwin and I keep asking myself, what will harry do if he ever finds out Anna had a love affair prior to him and at a young age as well. You have such darkness in this tale which allows you to bring in the light to brighten the gloom. I love how each character has their own problem to deal with and I love the twist with Lily as well. You really have a knack for story telling and what I also like about this your characters are not vulnerable. You give them strength and courage to take care of themselves without depending on someone else. I hope you continue this. I would really love to read more! My favorite scene though was when Anna stayed with her dad for the Easter holiday and they went to see Jack. You really captured that element of man vs. nature and the rain was a nice touch to the gloomy atmophere. Then the whole thing about Jack being soulless and then the lack of emotion shadowing the room but yet there was still that sense of hope like Jack was still there and not all of his soul had left him. Anyways, again, please continue. I would love to read more!

Author's Response: Oh my God! Thank you so sooo much for such a wonderful and encouraging review!! I am speechless. Wow. Thank you.

I am really happy that you like my story and I really hope that you will enjoy the rest of it as much. I will most definitely continue it and I would love to know what you think.

I am glad you liked the scene with Anna and Jack in the hospital when she went home for Easter--I tried to capture both sadness and anger and I am happy the message came through.

Once again, I love your review and thank you so much because it is honestly very encouraging for me to know that you like what I write and once again, I will most definitely continue it, especially now that my exams are out of the way.

Thank you (again ;P)

Merope :)

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