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Review:SuperMegaFoxyAwesomeHot says:
Hey there! :) I read this story yesterday and liked it so much that I couldn't stop and gobbled up every chapter. That's saying something from me, haha. And now I've come back to review!

I think you've done a really good job so far. The way you wrote the characters is very well done. The Next Gen children all of their own personalities, which is refreshing to see. Haha, I love some are being kind of bratty, some are being sweet, etc. And Teddy's frustration with all of them and his frustration toward his uncle's a bit extreme, but you made it believable.

I love mysteries, and I'm really excited to play the who-dunnit game with this one. I'm jealous of you for coming up with such a creative and adorable storyline, where Teddy and the kids are making up the story. The way you've executed this so far is awesome.

And, as I have read ahead already (will most likely review other chapters sometime, too), I can already say that this story is funny and gripping. You should write more comedy-mysteries.

I wonder who did it...hmmm...*taps chin thoughtfully*

Guess I'll just have to keep on reading to find out! :D

Keep up the great work and take care, *high-fives abound*
Sarah < 3

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you very much! This story has been sitting on the backburner for me, so it's a great surprise and pleasure to review a review for it, especially such a positive and encouraging one. ^_^

It's great that you like the characters in this. It was my first time writing the next-gen, so I was reaching out blindly to capture them. Teddy is iffy in this story, I agree. I still find him difficult to write, maybe because he's a Metamorphagus - that'll be my excuse. :P I'll remember to be careful with his temper/frustration in the coming chapters.

The mystery in this is so mysterious that even I don't know who did it yet. :S It's hard to decide who to make the killer without making it too obvious or too ridiculous. But it's a fun story to write, and I'm very glad that you like how it's gone so far.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! It means a huge amount to hear from you! ^_^

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