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Review:Ronsgirl29 says:
Hey Ronsgirl29 here from the forums!

I'm usually a very strong James/Lily shipper, but I did enjoy your story. I guess since Sirius and James are best mates, she could fall for either one of them. And I always had this idea that Sirius had a little thing for Lily (;

I thought it was a cute touch how she didn't learn his name, so she just had to wait each day for this mystery guy to come back without even knowing who he was.

The only thing that seemed odd was that how would lily not know them if they've been going to school together for a few years? I'd understand them not being friends, but not knowing eachother at all seemed a little farfetched, but it worked for the purpose of the story.

One of my favorite parts was when the cranky shop lady was nice to lily and told her to go with her man (: It was nice to see that she actually had a heart, and wasn't truly nasty.

Over all it was a nice read and I'm glad I read it! But of course I'm sorta hoping that James will show up and she'll fall for him instead ;)

-Ronsgirl29

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you for taking the time to read!

I'm glad that you enjoyed the story so far, even though you're a J/L shipper for the most part. Your logic is pretty good; I never really thought of it that way, I just sort of started writing and... well, let the story take me where it wanted to go. (: I suppose you're right that it's a bit odd how they don't know each other at all, but I'm glad you thought it worked in the end. As for James... well, let's just say he'll make his appearance eventually (;

Thanks again for reviewing!


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