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Review:FoundriaPenguin says:
Hello! Here I am finally with my review. I'm so sorry about the wait -- exams ruled my life for a while.

The flow and characterization between the two different POVs were fine! I could easily understand who was speaking. As for Sirius, I think you definitely did him justice! "fathomless gray eyes..bear hug.." hehe, it makes me smile! :D

I haven't read any of your novel, All is NOT fair in love and war, but I wasn't lost too much in this story. Gypsies are a novel idea; this is the first story I've ever read about them on this site. I would never have connected them with magic and this is an interesting idea. I got a little lost with all of the gypsy history at first, but when I read it over again I got it. I got it, I got it. ^_^

I think this story stands well on it's own apart from your novel. I enjoyed it! The relationship between Saleena and Sirius is so sweet and beautiful. (:

~foundriapenguin

Author's Response: Don't worry about the wait, I understand. My apologies too for taking so long to reply to this wonderful review! :)

Awesome, I'm glad the POV switch seemed to be fine, cuz I was slightly nervous about that... It's also good to hear that you think I got Sirius right, cuz I had never written him before now! I'm glad you understood all the Gypsy stuff too, cuz again, I wasn't sure if all that really came thru or not...

Thanks reviewing this and answering all of my questions for me! And thanks for all of the wonderful comments too! I'm glad you liked it!! =)

Oh, and I agree with you... Exams really do suck by the way, lol! :p


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