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Review:lilgnome3 says:
This is a good story, and I'm really enjoying reading it.
If I have any criticism (and it is purely constructive because you are a good writer and I don't want to put you off at all) it is to just slow the story down slightly and add in more description and emotions, because that's what you need to make the reader feel like they are there in the middle of the drama. What you have is really good, just build on it.
I hope you update and continue this, it's too good to be lost and abandoned. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, that is very helpful constructive criticism. I will be continuing to update this and my other fics in July when I have finished my nanny course and have free time. Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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