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Review:Fisharefriends says:
Well, I really enjoyed this story, couldn't stop reading it while I was supposed to be revising so that says something. I like how you portrayed Lilly and kept that innocence of her youth. I also loved Scorpio's character, if only men like him really did exist *sigh*. Just the ending, that last bit before the epilogue, I don't know, it needs some more working up to I think, something different, a little more romance, and I don't think he really would declare it like that, boys are too cowardly to do that. Apart from that the rest of it I loved. Well done, write another one please :) xx

Author's Response: Heya my fine Gryffie friend! Thanks for the review, though of course officially I say "go and revise"! I'm glad you liked the characters I created here - I've had very mixed opinions about them, so it's good to know at least one person liked them.

The ending; yeah, it's not so good. The reason for this is that I'd originally written one (awful) ending, and then decided I didn't like it, so wrote another (slightly less awful) ending. However, the new ending had no basis in the original story, so it is hopelessly abrupt. As for Scorpius' declaration, I'm hoping the companion piece (Weekend in Azkaban, which you should definitely not read until your exams are over) will allow it to make more sense, but it's probably still too much. One day I'll get round to fixing this, but at the moment my head is all filled with my three WIPs (including the sequel to this story).

Just need to make sure those have a decent ending lined up!

Thanks for reviewing, and hope all's well!

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