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Review:brightside14 says:
So, I really enjoyed reading this! I thought you wrote Rose and Ava really well and I loved all their little jokes and conversations throughout the day-it just flowed smoothly. That little bit with "You have a you-know-what on Lord Voldemort?" definitely made me laugh. And then Scorpius is such a cutie as always, but seriously, though. Come on, Scorpius. Why were you so slow??

I liked how you built up the story to the end when he finally askes Rose, but I was like "NO" when she lied! It was a bit anticlimactic, honestly. I was so ready for the cute, romantic, fluffy ending lol. But other than that, I did really like this, it was well written and definitely kept my attention. I very much hope you decide to do a sequel!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked rose and Ava. I kind of made them like me and my friend so that I could keep them in character. :)

I've heard a lot about the ending and am contemplating writing a sequel or turning this into a short story. Thanks!

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