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Review:TallestTower says:
Hello there! It's Broomsticks the creator of this challenge.
I'm really glad to see what the challenge inspired you to do! :)

Your writing is lovely. I really like the tone. It was light and comical, but also there was great detail and beautiful descriptions of the mountain scenery.

Percy was very funny in this. You had me laughing out loud at "More like the Swan Lake School of Magnificent Altitude". :D He was still true to his character though and I thought it was a good characterization. He was just as nerdy and eager to please as canon Percy. I thought you portrayed him really well.

I love the idea of this - it's so creative! And the moral twist at the end was really lovely. I love Kingsley's wisdom and how it all tied together to make a point. You described the school wonderfully while still having this underlying message plot thing going on!

Another thing that was great was how much detail you went into about the school - and it flowed really well, the information didn't seem out of place or tedious. You gave the school character and background... I really liked the historic parts!

The grammar seemed pretty perfect to me, which is always nice :)

This is really very very well written and constructed. I love the added parts of German. There is so much here for me to love, it really is a wonderful piece and you managed to describe the castle so vividly in a one-shot! I really love the place you have created and the plot.

I really enjoyed reading this, thank you for posting. Look out for the challenge results, they should be appearing soon!


Author's Response: So glad that it turned out to be a great piece for you to read. Thanks so much for your extremely thoughtful review, and for creating such an interesting challenge!

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