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Review:odyssey says:
Wow. You really did a good job with this, it worked so well with the title. To be honest when I wrote that I was thnking more of Snape/Lily and that sort of thing but I really enjoyed this. Not a ship I would ever have thought of, but it worked.

The only thing I would mention is that you change from past tense to present tense back to past tense throughout this, so you might want to look at that to make it consistent.

Otherwise, I thought this was great! THanks for passing on the link. :D

-odyssey

Author's Response: First of all sorry for the long wait and thanks for taking the time to review.

Thank you so much for your compliments!. It’s a ship not alot of people would think of yes but I’m a big lover of minor ships and minor characters. So that’s why I had chosen this ship and you are right the title does fit a Snape/Lily.

Wel I will check that out and will try to correct it. Thanks for pointing that out by the way!

-xoxox-

Cleopatraa


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