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Review:hopelessDREAMS says:
Hey there! Here from the forums with your requested review!

I don't think I've read many stories on Helena. Not many people can portray her well and you seem to have done it. For a minute, when I was reading the part about her mother, it reminded me so much of Hermione. With being the smartest witch of her age and all.

You keep the story in check and your flow is perfect. I don't really have anything to comment on except for the misusage of some punctuation.

Great job!


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Author's Response: Thanks :) I didn't realise it sounded like Hermione but I read it again and it totally does! Punctuation is the bane of my existence. I seem to notice when other writers use it incorrectly but never myself, it's an annoyance. I think I'm comma-happy when I write. Trying to work on it, thanks for reviewing!

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