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Review:HopelessRomantic_x says:
Hiii! I'm one of the entries for the Regina Spektor challenge too and I couldn't resist having a look at your fic (':

Normally, I don't like Sirius with canon characters - I just feel that they don't conform very well but I liked the mix in this because it makes Lily look more like an actual girl rather than just the brainy bookworm that everyone thinks her to be - something I applaud you for!

Also like patchworkscribbles I did like the bit about how you've chosen to not have James in the picture yet which makes a good change too - surprisingly enough I found this particular song hard to work with but you've done so well with it and the lyrics go well with this chapter, it's brilliant! (:

Keep writing - mostly because I'm selfish & I really do want to read more (':

10/10
xxx

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm really glad that you decided to drop by and give my entry a look - and that you liked it! It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.. :) Also, I'm glad that you think this story makes their relationship (or almost relationship) seem more real without James in the picture, and that you think I've done well with adapting the song to the pairing. ^_^

Thank you for taking the time to read and review! Hope I don't disappoint! The next chapter has been completed, and should be up within the week.


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