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Review:Princess Di says:
To put it mildly I really liked this fic. A lot.

This has something that I've rarely seen before because you have added in the playboy factor. And I enjoyed that.

I like Roger in this fic. At first I was wrinkling my nose saying, "He's just another big headed playboy. Yuck. But I'll keep reading anyway." I am very glad now that I did. Because Roger doesn't keep that strictly to the player sterotype at all. Yes, he likes girls, but he really isn't that big of a jerk. He has an undercurrent of kindness to him. You are making girls think that players have a heart under all of that bravado! Maybe you should put a warning at the beginning of this fic that Roger's an exception, haha!

I liked you adding the people watching factor to Roger. That bit was facinating, to say the least. I enjoyed how he labled people.

And I liked Amalia! (Also, I really liked her name.) She's seemed really interesting, and from Roger's perspective she kind of seemed like she was freaking awesome.

I really liked this story, and found myself a bit sad that it was over. I want the after effect! I want to see what happens to these two afterwards! I want to see what Marissa has to say about this.

Kudos to you!

Author's Response: I'm glad you mildly enjoyed this fic :D

hahah, yes, Roger is an exception to the playboy factor; but if you think about it, all guys that are players do that (what roger does) but they don't show it. they've been hurt before and refuse to let that happen to them again ;] It's all down to the science haha.

Amalia was quite the cool character. I enjoyed writing her! She's def. as awesome as she's pined out to be.

Marissa? What a tart, who cares? ;] hahah, I'm being mean. Guh, I hate girls like Marissa. But yeah, I'm so sorry it ended just like that :P Maybe I'll write a short story later on? Who knows...


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