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Review:patchworkscribbles says:
Hi there! It's patchworkscribbles, reviewing as promised!

Firstly, well done for working with such a difficult mix! I cringed for you when I looked at the list and saw what you'd picked, but you've definitely made it work. I especially like the fact that the title of the story is a lyric from the song! So yes, well done indeed.

I also really, really like the fact that this is going to be spun out into a short story, I'm excited as to where it's going to end up! My favourite aspect of this tale is that you aren't having Lily and Sirius see each other behind James's back, or to his chagrin. The way you've chosen to have them as first lovers, as it were, is far more original than any other Sirius/Lily fics that I've seen. Again, well done for that!

This fic is really chock-a-block full of fantastic ideas and notions, so I'm really, really excited for seeing it all pull together! Thank you for putting forward such a brilliant fic for this challenge, I truly feel quite honoured!

Let me know when the next chapter's up and I'll drop by again ;D

-Patch x

Author's Response: YOU feel honored? I think I'm feeling a bit honored myself, having just received such a lovely review! Oh my gosh, I'm glad you're so excited for the story! I was really unsure about the whole thing, but I'm glad that you enjoyed this first chapter and think that the idea's original. I haven't read many Sirius/Lily fics myself, but I understand the cliche that they're associated with. Just thought this plot would fit the song a bit better, really.

Thank you again for reviewing! The next chapter should be up in a few days, I hope :)

Best,
Nadhira

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