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Review:make you want it says:
You've really done a great job writeing their relationship, It so natural one of the best written relationships I've read.
The have chemistry but its not overdramatic or over written there just real people in a relationship, nice one :)

I would like to hear just a little more about Sharon and her relationship with her own friends the focus has mainly been on Al and his friends, I get the impression the Al is a lot closer to his friends that she is the hers and I like that but it would still be nice to just get to know her on her own a little better.

Author's Response: Thanks! Al and Sharon's relationship comes very naturally to me, and I'm definitely not an expert on dating or anything in that area. I've heard from other people that I should add more to Sharon, and I completely agree. You're right that Al's a lot closer to his friends than her, but that's not much of an excuse. Thanks. :)

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