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Review:make you want it says:
The way you have inturpreted Al is great I like that he's got some of harrys loyalty to his friends but its still belivable that he is a slytherin.
also I really like how his past view of Sharon is diffrent to her view of him, she says they have a history yet he couldn't remember her name.
So adorable how he just fell for her when he saw her and ovbiously still adores her.
I'm looking forward to find out more about Sharon as a person outside their relationship. Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I didn't even remember that Sharon thought they had a history! Haha, that just shows my lack of planning, although it does end up working out quite nicely with the two characters' personalities. Good eye, there. Thanks.

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