Our website is made possible by displaying online advertisements to our visitors.
Please consider supporting us by disabling your ad blocker.





Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:siriusgirl1 says:
I realize you wrote this a really long time ago (Five years? Wow!), but in in case you ever feel like going back and editing, the first paragraph needs some TLC. There's several grammatical/spelling type errors ("done to far" instead of "gone too far"). I like most of the dialogue, but the ending felt way too abrupt. True, it showed the turning point, but we readers didn't get to see *how* Lily changed her mind, we just saw that she did. It would be nice to see some sort of clear transition. For such a short fic, it is well written though.
Siriusgirl1

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 614
Submit Report: