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Review:WitnesstoitAll says:
Leslie. :)


I'm not going to lie. I was a bit hesitant to really begin reading this after seeing the glaring Sirius/OC pairing staring back at me. But I really think that you could make this work. All of your characters seem like they are off to really good starts and have room to continue to grow through out the story. I really do like Marauder era stories that focus on minor characters. It is refreshing to see Emmaline and Hestia's names here. :D My only suggestion to you would be to maybe tweak the summary some. jazz it up a bit. You have a great start here and the world should know it. lol.

xx
Melissa

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Melissa! You have no idea how happy I am to hear that this is not another cliche Sirius/OC stories. I really did try to make it different, but I don't read that many Sirius/OC unless it falls into my review thread, so to read that all the characters are on the right track is nice to read. As for the summary, I went ahead and took your word for it and revised it. Thanks again for the positive feedback! :)

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