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Review:RonNiffler says:

This is RonNiffler from forums and I'm here with your review!

So I really don't know what to expect. This is my very first Remus/Tonks story I've read! Goes to show having a review page can really open one up to new section of stories!

In all I really did enjoy this. I never lost my interest and the whole time I was just dying to read more!

Detail lacked a bit. I find it had to write from first person and still include plenty of detail. You did better then a lot of people would, but you know what they say. The more detail the better! =D

I really didn't see any grammar mistakes, but that may have been because I was so absorbed in you story! If you're worried though you can always get a beta. I for one find mine extremely useful!

Your writing style with jumping around was very unique. I've read a couple stories like this and have never really decided if I liked them for not. The way you wrote yours though was very excellent and I'm starting to like this form of writing.

It was a bit confusing when Remus killed that girl, at first I thought it was Tonks, but you cleared that up pretty quickly.

That really does explain now why Remus has always been so careful. It was so sad though!

Well let me just say you did a great job and it was a pleasure reading your one-shot!

Author's Response: Hey!

Oh, thank you! Haha, I didn't know what to expect either when I wrote it!

Thank you very much! I'm glad I held your interest!

I completely agree with you. I still have much to do in terms of improving my writing, and detail is probably something I should work on for my next story, (and edit this one!) That's great! Spelling and grammar is kind of my strong point, so I probably don't need a beta :)

Awh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you found it unique! I strived to make it sound like a story. I hate those stories that go - The next day blah. Or have the dates. It just gets confusing and it's so unoriginal! So I'm very pleased you found it unique and excellent!

Okay, I'm glad that I didn't leave you confused for long! Sadness was a theme that I was trying to convey, so I'm glad that got through!

Woah, just thank you so much for your lovely review and helpful feedback! Thanks! I really appreciate it! :)

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