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Review:datbenik513 says:
I'm sorry to disappoint you, but it didn't creep me out. It scared the hell out of me. Now happy? :D

Knowing your oeuvre quite a bit, I don't think I'm far from truth by saying that this is your most accomplished work to date. One can clearly tell where your heart lies; horror, really horroristic horror flows naturally from your pen.

...her every scream driving a nail deeper, deeper, deeper until his veins ruptured with grief... Simply amazing. The imagery throughout this quite long one-shot is just twistedly poetic. Somehow did remind me of Lovecraft and Poe, but this is unmistakably your style. I strongly encourage you to change a few wordings and names and send it to some publishers, or, even better, write a few more pearls like this!

The staggered, broken storytelling - short paragraphs, unfinished sentences - Stephen King at it's best.

Very hard to find the praising words that would do justice to your work. It's just... awesome. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Hello Zoltan!
Agh! You flatter me. I just know I don't deserve such praise, especially considering I wrote this during my whooping cough episode when I was half-coherent most of the time. ;) Honestly, I think I jotted down the first part (Scorpius's funeral) the week before I got sick and then I totally forgot about this story for a month. So yes, I'm completely thrilled to hear that you enjoyed this fic. Part of me thought it was a bit too brutal and because I'm a fan of subtle horror, I really hesitated to post it.

I am, however, planning a sequel, now that you've inspired me with your thoughtful review. Well, not a sequel, really, but another one-shot similar to this. And if it turns out half-way decent and I work up the nerve to post, guess who I'm gonna dedicate it to? ^_^

Again, you are way too kind. I cannot thank you enough. Take care and be well!

Lee Anne

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