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Review:snowlilly says:
Interesting. I think that it's missing something, but I liked it nonetheless. I thought that the writing style is well formed, but the story itself seems to use unnecessary punctuation and language. I'll keep reading anyway, so please update soon... I still felt like it was a cliffhanger, though.

Author's Response: I have to admit that it's not my most favourite piece of writing and that I do think that i'll need to go back to edit it eventually. When I do decide to edit it (if I ever get round to it) then i'll make sure that I keep in mind your comments about punctuation and language - I think that they'll come in handy :)

I'll update whenever I can as the next few chapters for this story are all only about half finished and slightly muddled at the moment :D

Thankyou so much for the review! :)
Dee, x

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