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Review:emmapotter says:
This one is absolutely.ravishing? I honestly cannot come up with a better word.. :P
Such a great read! :D Honestly! I was completely into it throughout and kind of disappointed that this one was so short.. :(
I generally ask the author to extend their one-shot in to a short story or summat but not this time.. :D I think this on's perfect as it is! :) I really really liked this..the second-person thing worked well too.
Scorpius was different in this.I liked the way beneath all that cockiness (of which we a small glimpse in the way he spoke to Al) he's extremely insecure..at least that's how I interpreted it. ;)
Anyway, I'm rambling now.. :PP
Great job with this..I'll try some of your other stuff..you seem to have an interesting style! :D
love
Ak~

Author's Response: Hello!!

Thank you for this ravishing review. I decided you use your word since I couldn't come up with a better one. :D I'm very glad that you enjoyed this little one shot. It just sort of came to me and basically wrote itself, so it is a relief to hear that it read smoothly. Scorpius is an interesting character, no?

I'd be honoured if you read more of my stuff. Although all of my stories are pretty vastly different. lol. I do hope you find something else you like.

-xx-
Melissa


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