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Review:Jessabelle says:
Jesi here with your requested review! (:

Personally, I thought this was perfectly fluffy! :D I consider anything that makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside to be fluff. Their unspoken feelings, and the fact that they are happy in their silence contributes to the fluff factor.

When writing fluffy pieces, it's important to keep a wistful quality to both the passage and the characters; almost as if the time passes by effortlessly. Like that saying goes, "Time flies when you're having fun"- this is a great example of fluff, and was very well-used in this one-shot. (:

If you think about it too much, then it's not as fluffy as something that you could write on a whim.

I hope my random snippets of advice could help! Thanks so much for requesting a review~ I really liked your characters and their story. It left me with a big smile on my face!

Jesi

Author's Response: thank you so much! It thrills me to hear you think this is fluffy enough, and your advice will really help me for the next time I try and write fluff :) - Marina

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