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Review:Jolly says:
I loved this story! You portrayed Luna amazingly, described her just as I imagined her and put words to some things in her character that I have not been able to.
I also loved the chronology, it made the story even more interesting and unique. For us to gradually find out what killed her was really clever and I liked how you mentioned Rolf.
All in all, fantastic! 10/10!

Author's Response: Oh wow, those are such huge compliments for me to hear! She's a little bit hard to pin down, but I just felt so pleased to be giving it a go.

Ah, the controversial chronology :P. Some people found it confusing, some people were indifferent and some people loved it. My main aim behind it was to show how different Luna was. Her death couldn't be conventional and, in my eyes, neither could a story written about it be.

I'm so incredibly pleased that you enjoyed this XD. Thank you for taking the time to read and review!

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