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Review:Rose_Weasley123 says:
Um... what am I critiqueing this for? It is obvious that you are a writing goddess. End of.

Seriously, I completely envy your talent. You have such a wonderful way with words that I could only ever hope to achieve. Your description is out of this world gorgeous. Your use of imagery is perfect, and you describe a scene completely clearly and bring out small details in it. It's just. stunning, really.

The plot was lovely. On the surface it wasn't about very much, just a moment spent between two people, but you made it so multi faceted. It was more about what you left unsaid, and that gorgeous last line which left it so open ended.

The characterisation was perfect too, completely original and engaging portrayals of Teddy and Victoire. The dialogue use was lovely too :D.

Um... critique? So this isn't a fail of a review :P. Make it longer? I wanted to read more :).

Simply perfect Marina, not that i'd expect anything less :P.

Author's Response: oh Becca :) You don't know how much your praise means to me, I have this silly smile on my face right now because of you. THANK YOU!!!

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