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Review:RoseLolly says:
Lovely and well written =] and a sweet amount of sad..

I have a tiny bit of concrit though. The repetitive use of the word 'week', when physical strength is actually 'weak', its so little and simple, but every time i saw it, it annoyed me. So it distracted me from your story...

apart from that, it's perfectly swell =]

Author's Response: Dang i thought i got all the spelling! Lol, guess i have to edit again *sigh* Anyway, thanks for pointing that out for me and I'm glad you liked the story!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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