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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
Hey there, onestop_hpfan18 here to review as requested, and I am terribly sorry for the long delay as I've been quite busy with college/work. But I'm here to review now.

Characterisation: I enjoyed reading the interaction between Ruby and Sirius, and you've described a few of their traits quite well by slipping them in randomly rather than listing them all out at once. It's like a surprise if you're not given everything about characters when authors leave some things unanswered. Leaves more for the imagination before more is revealed. And already, I think you've hit Sirius's characterisation off well.

Plot/Flow: Not much plot, but so far the story is flowing well toward revealing the plot little by little as it continues onward. It's original and intriguing. I'm definitely curious to read what'll happen next.

Overall, great first chapter, and keep up the excellent writing!

Author's Response: Hello! :D Thank you so much for leaving a review, I'm terribly sorry it took me so long to respond.

I can't tell you how much it means to me to hear that the characterization is alright! Especially Sirius, as he is my absolute favorite character and I'm ridiculously picky when it comes to how he is portrayed. To hear that I'm even remotely close to having alright characterization of him is beyond brilliant!

Thank you so very much for the lovely comments and wonderful review!!

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