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Review:The Empress says:
Hello Melanie dear! I am here from the review exchange :)
I'd read this before, but apparently hadn't reviewed -hides- SORRY

This is NOT Founders fail, you goose. It's beautiful. The way you've written Helena is perfect, in my opinion, for her character. Though we don't know a whole lot about her from the books, I think you've interpreted her well. Her guilt and remorse, as well as her never-ending pride. She comes across as selfish and child-like in her pride as well. Brilliant.

Her reasons for stealing the diadem are well written as well. We knew she was jealous, but this takes it deeper. And the interaction with Dunstan was great also. SO LOVELY

Am adding this to my favourites, of course. Beautiful story dear. I would love to read the rest of it!

xoxo
Shiloh

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Shiloh! I promise to read and review yours shortly!

Glad you liked how I wrote Helena here. This was heavily influenced by Alex's one-shot about this very same scene, but I wanted to redeem my Helena a little more than she's normally written. I wanted to show her obvious flaws, but also show her in a light that would make the reader sympathize with her a bit more.

I'm hoping to get the next few chapters up soon. I've written half of the second chapter, but I got a bit stuck, so hopefully it will work itself out soon.

Thanks again!

xoxo
Melanie


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