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Review:louise_loves_hp says:
Hey LouiseIShere for your review
You plot sounds like its going to be full of twist and turns but the way you desribe things was like they were write in frount of me. I just want to know was the Alice inspired?
I thought that to have someone not know any thing in a place like Epephany is just what they need so they will find out the question that is burning in there mind and I did like how the curiosity part played out.
Great Chapter to draw people in and great way to level them wanting more

Author's Response: I'm so sorry it took so long to review! I've been swamped with work lately and - here's a piece of advice - don't procrastinate. Because then you'll have to make it all up at the last moment and won't have time to write. :P

But anyhow, thank you for leaving such a nice review! You're right in that the plot (I hope) will be rather unpredictable, as I'm keen on adding in twists that readers won't expect.

As for inspiration, Alice did prove to be rather influential in the way I tried to portray Epiphany! I'm glad the description was alright.

Yep, you're on the path to figuring out what Epiphany is all about! I'm so glad you like the bit with curiosity, and it's lovely to hear you liked the chapter.

Thank you so much for such a kind review!

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