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Review:FoundriaPenguin says:
Ooh, nice twist with the old lover coming up!

Again, I feel as if you could describe how the characters feel more, except for the sisterly scene which I think you got perfectly. (: Readers like to be able to contemplate parts in the story, not just get on with it, you know?

But the flow was great! I find the humor in this story really good. xD Makes me laugh, always.


Author's Response: Yes old lover Benny. I personally love/hate her, like all Benny-like people in the world.

I will work more on developing the characters for the readers. Thanks for pointing that out :)

I'm glad you liked the humor in this story. I feel like it rarely comes out ahah

Thanks for reviewing!

becca xx

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