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Review:FoundriaPenguin says:
Ahhh I'm so sorry it took me so long to review! But I'm here now :D

Anyways, you asked about plot and flow..I think the plot has an interesting twist to it! :O It's very original compared to other Teddy/Dom/Victoire stories I've read.

As for the flow, I like how you separate time with the number of cigarettes Teddy smokes...haha that's really creative (: The switch from Dom's and Ted's point of view was fine, too. :D

Overall, very interesting story!


Author's Response: Its fine :)

I'm glad you enjoyed the plot so far, and liked the flow. Its good to know the change between Dom and Teddy are seamless.

Thanks for reviewing !

becca xx

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