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Review:Jackson Robles says:
Hola SearchingForLuna - I'm thinking Esseffle. ;) It works.

Anyways, hi! What an interesting story. Well, that's a bit of a stilted statement to make after just reading the first paragraph, but then again, it's an interesting beginning (how's that for rewording?!) Anyway - Mr. Shorb... and then Samantha Riddle. How ... curious. Very curious. She doesn't resemble anything of her family now does she? She's petite, not blonde, and most certainly not plump - so what does that mean?

She's obviously not their daughter. Now I don't know what kind of people the Shorb's are - whether they know all about Sammy's past... but they must, as they seem like wizard folk... so does that mean they're Dark Wizards? Blonde... instantly makes you think of the Malfoys - but then again, Sammy DOESN'T want Slytherin. Is that her 'family's' reasoning or is her worry about her last name. Samantha Riddle in the footsteps of Tom Riddle? Maybe... and where could she have come from anyhow? Hmm... I'm very interested to see.

I like coming in when Teddy and Victoire are young-ins! A different look at the Next Generation - how refreshing! And the control over the narration is nice! No mess ups or stumbling descriptions, so the reading was fun and easy going as well! What a treat :P

Samantha's a character as well isn't (and yes, I have just stated the obvious) - but OC... ically speaking? You know what I mean... anyways, Sammy seems kind of... hard to peg so early on. Which is a good thing, I suppose - definitely suppose. :P

What else can I say? I'm off to find out what's going on! What a teaser chapter! Give us Vicky and Teddy and then throw Sammy Riddle in the mix with a sister with the last name Shorb and very little knowledge of magic all together - we're going to have fun on this bumpy ride ;)

Nice chapter Esseffles! Looking forward to the next one, Jackson

Author's Response: Oooh! Another lovely long review!!! :D ... Esseffle?

It's nice to see you puzzling things over. Don't worry, the Shorbs are just ordinary (and sweet) wizarding folks, a Hufflepuff family... no relation to the Malfoys. And they know ALL about Sammy... trying not to say too much...

Oooh, I hope you review the next chapter! I loved this review, super duper helpful and long and wonderful... --L


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