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Review:Barry Ahlers says:
This was really good. I thought that you did Margravine justice. It definitely has the same qualities that her stories possess. This is about Charlie really? I think you give him too much credit. This girl is clearly out of this world with her advanced emotions and flowery description. I find it hard to believe that Charlie would even have turned this woman's head but maybe that is just me. Don't get me wrong though. I do like Charlie. It's just that it is not Rowling's style to give us stories that dwell on romantic thought. It's a bit of shock sometimes to read her characters at the center of such stories. I'm getting away from the story itself. Sorry. I really did enjoy this tidbit, even though it is vague. I imagine that would be the case with any 500 word story. Well done!

Author's Response: Hmmm, I wonder who you are, Barry? :P

Thank you very much though, I'm convinced that this is one of my weaker pieces, but I'm glad that it didn't let me down completely! Or Margravine for that matter.

Of course it's about Charlie! He's a babe. Fleur is young and naive and perfectly silly at times, and Charlie is an older (devastatingly attractive) man, not giving her the attention she's used to from all men. He's not quite as stunned be her Veela heritage as he probably should be, but Fleur is mesmerised by the fact that he's not. And that he's hot.

Thank you very much for this lovely review! ^_^

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