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Review:F L A M M E says:
Oh my god.

-faints-

Jane, this was so amazing! How could you say it is horrible?! I had to re-read it like fifty million times because it was sooo beautifully written! The way you put the language to use makes this piece flow so nicely!

Also, your description kills me. (Even if most description kills me because I cannot write it, period.) But, this was just amazing.

THIS: For now, and maybe forever, she is the young girl in her motherís pearls trying so hard to show the world how she has grown and lamenting as the clasp collapses, the string frays and the beads shatter. And why he causes them to shatter she cannot quite say, but he does and they do.

AND THIS: She is a glittering void of blissful obscurity, drowning in waves which crash and fracture before her, left with naught but sandy stretches of self that she loathes.

made me jizz in my pants. Not even kidding. This was gorgeous.

I loved it. JUST REALIZED THIS WASN'T A ONE-SHOT. YAY!

...By the way, I totally did not just do a little dance in my seat.


ILY.



SEAN

Author's Response: -Revives-

You're a very silly boy, Sean :P. In my opinion this definitely is one of my more hideous pieces xD. I bet you really had to reread it because it was utter madness and made next to no sense, lol.

I CAN'T WRITE IT EITHER. This is me being a silly girl trying too hard. Dialogue is my husband. It's beauteous.

That was me being JO. Probably the most Jo-like lines of the lot! So if you liked them you should definitely go check her out ;). She's a babe.

Yes - it's getting updated in three hundred years :P.

Thanks so much for the review, darling! ILYTOO ♥


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