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Review:Mad Hatter says:
Ali! 'Tis Emma here. I'm as bad at reviewing as you say you are, so here goes. :P I did love the beginning of this - I've been distracted by a slightly dodgy marauder story I had read half of about two years ago and went back to, so...

This was a delightful start, quite different from all those Marauder era stories that stopped me writing Marauder era. XD No one was disgustingly OOC, Lily had faults (gasps!) and she wasn't the goddess of studying.

Also, James/Lily interaction was actually like normal human beings. For this, I love you. Especially that she let him go and he didn't try to get her to marry him or advance on her whatsoever.

So yes, this was a stunning intro to the story, and particularly Lily's character. Delightfully unperfect, and definitely a winning writing style - light, perfect description and dialogue, and it's leaving me itching to read more of it. Which I shall do presently.

- emma xx

Author's Response: Thanks very much Emma! I'm trying to make this story different from the majority of the others out there, but without going against canon. Hopefully I can get the balance right. Thanks again!

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