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Review:Lady Kyra says:
This is an excellent one-shot. The description is so vivid that one feels as though they are right there beside the characters, seeing the old house and feeling the summer sun. I also enjoyed how there is just enough romantic hints to make it light fluff, but few enough that it is not overpowering, which is very easy to do in a fluff piece.

The characterization was very intriguing and made you wonder about the characters. The way they know each other so well automatically suggests their deep friendship and romance, and additionally adds an interesting depth to the story. I must say that I like the way Victorie is portrayed in this story; so many make her vapid.

As for style, as I earlier mentioned, it is excellent. It makes me want to read more, which might be my only complaint. I would wish for more length, but I understand that when the story is over in the author's head, it is perfect. Nothing else need be added. Again, the description was the best part, personally, when reading it.

Grammar and spelling was overall excellent.

I hope that this review helps you in some way!

Author's Response: thank you ever so much!

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