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Review:MaraudersForever101 says:
Wow. This story was absolutely brilliant. I loved it... just wow.

With the hints, I got most of them, but didn't really process it until the end. Like how the girls were gossiping in the library, I got that and what it was foreshadowing. But, how Remus was kind of always guiding him, or something (with all the firm hands on Sirius's shoulder), that I was just confused about. Now that I've read this chapter, though, it all makes sense.

I felt bad for Eleanor when she went up to the dormitory and found out, but then she had Peter. I really liked that part. It makes me wonder, if Peter ever found someone who he loved that loved him, too, if he would've become a traitor. I guess no one will ever know, but it makes a nice thought.

Well, I, without a doubt, loved this story. So... 10/10

Author's Response: Wow. This review is amazing! Because it's been a while since I wrote this story, it's surprising to still receive a review, especially one like yours. The hint with the girls was one that some readers actually skipped over, thinking it to be just a rumour, not real. The other things with Remus could have only been friendship, or one-sided affection, so those clues were more subtle (and possibly some readers thought them misleading :P).

It's great that you liked that part with Peter at the end, as that was the "crown" of this story, in which I really wanted to rebel against the cliches of the Marauder story. It'd be nice to think that, just maybe, Peter could have been "saved" from what happened.

Anyway, thank you very much for this review! It definitely made my day. ^_^

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