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Review:wolverine83 says:
I absolutely love these last couple of chapters and I really feel for Holden being torn between two girls and not knowing which one he wants to be with, I'm sure every guy will relate to that atleast once in their lifetime. I just wish he had more supportive friends than James and Fred who both seem to follow in Ron's footsteps when it comes to being dense about situations such as the one Holden is in right now. Honestly, I want to see Holden and Alyssa together because I feel as if they would have much better chemistry than Holden and Lauren but thats just my opinion. I hope you can update soon because I really want to know what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was worried how this chapter might come across to readers and it makes me happy that you enjoyed it, and that you also enjoyed the last chapter. This story is definitely in the home stretch, but still has quite a few chapters left to write out. I'm working on writing the next chapter... which it shouldn't take me all that long as I can pump out the words fast when I sit down to write a chapter for this story because it's so much fun to write. Not to mention I have everything planned out and know what I want to happen... except the ending might change as it's never concrete as I leave the ending flexible where it could either way. I should be able to get more writing done this summer, but I am interning and taking two classes, so we shall see as I don't want to make any promises. Thanks again so much for reviewing, I really do appreciate any and all feedback that I receive! XD

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