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Review:Jackson Robles says:
Oh she's so in Gryffindor. I'm calling it. Suspense, sushmense. :/ If that's the right one.. hehe

Hi Akabara! I told you I liked this fic, and Peyton, as incredibly bothersome as she is, can't HELP but grow on you. You know? And I kind of did get the feeling she was heavily compensating. For emotions in general I suppose would be what I think. And a little direction was all I needed I suppose. I can usually peg things pretty well while reading. Peyton was an interesting nut to look at. There were two ways I could have gone I think, and I was teetering closely on either side. I fell on the >:( one instead of ;) you know?

But what are we looking at here anyhow - story wise! A very interesting first take on Hogwarts. And it was done lovely... ee. Well...? Yeah. It was done well. And it WAS lovely. See - there we go! Knew I'd get it down eventually. I have an ongoing battle with words, you see. Sometimes they win, sometimes I win - but oi, even if I do I'm confused afterward anyways... so in a way, words always seem to win.

REGARDLESS! Can we just take a look at the chapter please? What's with all these unrelated tangents that keep cropping up all over the place? Grrr! Colin! He's back... er, Dennis's son is. But still, he kind of reminds me of Colin (which yeah, you don't have to tell me, it's a weird thing to say...) from the books! But he's that ... hero's nephew isn't he? And Ira Finnegan! We're looking at an interesting ensemble of kids here aren't we?

I'm rather itching to read more, or rather, waiting impatiently to read more. I want to see! What happens? Where's this going? What's Conan's problem? I think I have guesses, but I'll keep them to myself in case I'm wrong, so I'll just have to wait and see where this all goes down hill and where we come to at the end, right?! Right.

I had the feeling that walking up all those steps was going to get Peyton's blood sugar dropping. Good thing Albus took those things off the train with him - good thing he was such a pig, actually, or else we might have a girl passing out in the middle of the hall!! Which would not be funny at all, but a serious problem considering that she... well, you know. hehe

(you know who / left this review) that rhymed. I'm amazing.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Gryffindor seems to be where most people's bets are...
Lol Peyton = nut. She would be insulted. I, on the other hand, am very glad that she has started to grow on you. Good use of smileys there. :D
xD Lovely.
Haha yeah, Colin. I don't know why I decided on that- it was a random thing. And yes, Seamus' son makes an appearance.
Lol I do the same thing- don't tell anyone what I think unless I think I'm right.
YAY Albus saves the day! Who ever knew that shoving sweets in your pockets could help so much?
Oh wow. Rhymes. Nice.
Thanks so much for all the wonderful reviews!

-AKABARA


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