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Review:F L A M M E says:
You? Can't write fluff?

What NONSENSE! This was amazing as per usual! When ISN'T something of yours amazing?

Firstly, the description? It made me die. Really. I had soo many favorite lines in this!

"Hills stretch up to catch the last few rays of sunlight as they paint zebra stripes across the grass." - That was just so colorful and pretty. I wish the sun could do that here, but its California. Things are hidden by clouds of cigarette smoke. :P

"Sleepy eyed they will rise early so that they can squeeze the minutes from the daylight like juice from an orange. On the cusp of independence, they’ll cling to every moment they have together until the sun finally sets for last time." Those two lines were just BRILLIANT. This pretty much makes me feel like I fail at writing and at life in general. How. HOW DO YOU DO THIS?! You wrote this so beautifully and so idyllically, gah! Again, me = fail at life. You = love.

I should probably stop my stupid praise of you because I probably sound like some sort of creeper man. (even if I sometimes stalk you...)

I love your writing. I love your description. I love you.



Author's Response: Sean... I really don't know how to respond to this! I woke up this morning and read this, and no kidding, I had a spring in my step for the rest of the day. This review made me feel SO good about my writing, I can't tell you. Not only that, but you did make me laugh a tiny bit too. I can't believe you stalk me, but I suppose that's your choice.

you're so lovely, THANK YOU ♥

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