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Review:LindaSnape says:
This was beautiful!

I wouldn't really consider it fluff, but it's certainly not angst! I do believe you were the one trying to stray away from that in at least one of your stories? If so, well, congrats. I think you can safely say that you managed it here.

This was cute, mind you, but nothing particularly fluffy. There were no embarrassing moments or banter, and it wasn't disgustingly romantic.

However, not every story should be like that.

I like that this felt very realistic yet flowed poetically. It flowed very nicely and I didn't find any word that seemed jarring or misplaced, and that's always a good thing, I think.

Not to mention the mastery of the English language is impeccable, and the lack of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes is refreshing. It gives it all the more, a polished look, that I can really appreciate.

I really enjoyed this all, especially the last line. For some reason, it stuck with me.

I have nothing to criticize except, perhaps, the length. But that's just my personal preference. I know how hard it can be to write something so eloquent and include many more words. Yet, being a wordy person, I cannot refrain from doing that, myself.

However, despite it's length, this is quite enjoyable, I'll admit.


Linders

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! Yes, it was me who was trying to stay away from angst and I think this is the furthest I've gone... I couldn't really give it a genre, so fluff was the nearest I could get.

I know it's short, but as it didn't particularly have a plot I didn't think I needed to string it out :P

thanks so much for reviewing! xx


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