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Review:Jackson Robles says:
The Ministry's down! Whatever shall they do?! . They'll spend the night in the woods - that's what. I mean, really, they just have to be sure that their place wasn't compromised! And Dudley said Voldemort too! Was the taboo placed? Well, if not then, then definitely now (weird phrasing...)

Yeah, hullo Black. My seriously serious time at being playfully serious is seriously over and I no longer have any intention of being either fully playful or serious - but shall instead choose a amalgam of both properties and just hope for the best. And therefore! We now start the review. Or is it ergo? I think, if I had one iota of what I was talking about I'd know that it was 'ergo' - my bad there.

It's not horrible for not being edited. My first run throughs at writing have really O_O mistakes in them as well. I think mostly everyone makes most of these mistakes when writing one time through. Edits are ♥ - but I do understand your rush and... ahem, mistake, so it's all good.

Onto the content! *thinks* Well, we're looking at an important chapter. One keeping in time with Deathly Hallows - and one that I think hold quite a significant weight - I mean, they just left the Potter house! Are they going to go back? And Dudley's thinking of Hazel in a very teenage boy way - which is good I think, for the romance at least.

Oi - I'm glad Petunia had a little bit of sense in this chapter. Although it was callous and annoying, she at least was able to bring her husband down a couple steps and just when Vernon was finally told off about accepting the house! They have to leave.

Anyways, I'm interested and continue to enjoy the read.

Mr. Robles

Author's Response: Robles,

I know that you've already read the next few chapters and left me absolutely marvelously long reviews on each... So I plan to read all of them, make small comments on each, then compose a lengthy response in the most recent review.

I'm glad this chapter wasn't "horrible for not being edited!" Yay for that! Major editing streak begins in a little under 2 weeks! Get excited!

On to the next fabulous review!

-Blackly_Serious


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