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Review:Alopex says:
Aw, cute ending. This chapter was much shorter than most in this story, but it was a sweet ending and didn't need to be any longer, since you summed everything up pretty well in chapter 14.

I don't have much to say about this chapter, really. Arthur was rather adorable in his enthusiasm . . . I felt for Molly and the way she felt left out of the getting-jobs-and-moving-out business her friends are up to.

I did feel like this chapter was a little more scattered in terms of the characters. It's challenging to write large groups of people, and usually you do it well, but it didn't seem quite as cohesive this time. Maybe that's because you had to get them all in such a short space.

The OCs are brilliant, though. I've said it before, but I still like them. :-D I'm a bit anxious about the next installment, because I know they can't all make it safely through. :-(

Anyway, congratulations on finishing this story! (Haha, I'm reminiscing about when you finished "Unsinkable" and feeling proud that I've been following you for that long.) Your Molly and Arther set the bar, without a doubt.

Author's Response: I really didn't think this was a strong chapter/epilogue (since it wasn't really a chapter), especially compared to the finale of Unsinkable - funny that, since I think this story is stronger than Unsinkable, but that ended better - but I had dragged my feet so long on it that I just had to make myself finish it.

I do love my OCs, I hate to do anything to them, but it is a war, after all. Not everyone gets a happily ever after, and not all the ones who DO get one get to keep it forever.

Yeah, you've been one of my most loyal reviewers/readers

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