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Review:butterbeergal says:
Wow.

The onslaught of emotions was just... wow.

I'm not much of a Sirius/Lily shipper, but this moved me in ways that no other story has ever done. The picture you painted was so vivid, and I could literally feel their pain. In fact, it's been a good 15 minutes since I finished reading the story but the mood, the setting, the emotions are still with me, still running through my head.

The way you characterized Sirius was just spot on - his issues, reactions, everything. Just brilliant. And Lily - what I would give to be in her shoes despite the sadness of it all.

He sank down to one knee, his dark cloak billowing behind him in the wind as he moved.

This line really stuck to me. It reads and feels so Sirius.

They must hate him for that...that he would rather be alone than bow to their demands. And yet, it wouldn't surprise her if they desired him back for that same reason - the courage to defy the Noble House of Black.

And that line pretty much sums up the reason why I am, and forever will be, so enamored by Sirius Black.

Bittersweet. Heartbreaking. Gorgeous. Touching. Relatable.

A beautiful piece, timeturner. Completely in love with it.

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