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Review:TheDirigiblePlum says:
This reminded me of Hardboiled, where I started reading the story thinking "Why are these characters acting in such crazy ways?!" and then the hilarious realisation and twist at the end that makes everything fall into place. :D

We always knew Sirius loved his motorbike so it's great a love story written in their honour.

“Her name is Brigitte, you uncultured git, and she is a vision in chrome, and I love her.”

I can imagine him saying that in an irritated and haughty way and then his voice progressively softening as he spoke of his undying love... that's just me though. I like how you make Sirius talk in a slightly poshish way (is that even a word?) because for me that just adds to his humour and charm. It's also coupled with a mischievious innocence that's very endearing. You always make me fall in love with the way you write characters. :) It's always so unique but never ooc.

Loved it!

Author's Response: Haha...this is the anti-"Sirius love story." I ship Sirius/motorbike. :-D

Yes, I think the way you envisioned him speaking those lines is EXACTLY how I imagined it in my head too!

Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you were entertained by this piece of random silliness.

Melanie


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