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Review:shadowycorner says:
Like I said, I printed these last two chapters out and read them off the computer in the middle of the night so I wouldn't get distracted and there was a line that totally grabbed my attention and felt really significant that i underlined it in the paper. It was the a death worth living for. words. Sad and horribly wonderful, that's what it evokes in me.

The transitions were once again surprising, but always effective. The Chapter was perfectly divided into sections that had me at the edge of the seat and whenever something ended with that little cliffie I thought I'd go crazy.

Draco's talk with Hannah once again brings the essence of a Potter novel, Hogwarts and everything else when the characters debate about mysteries and such. I liked that part a lot.

escorting her essence to an eternity of singing and screaming... Another bone-chilling line written in a way only you could write it.

The rest of the story just went by a whim. I couldn't stop reading it, it totally captivated me and the ending schocked me. Maybe I could've expected it to end that way, but I didn't. Still, even though it was sad and I felt my heart crack, that ending was just fantastic.

It's a great achievement what you've done with this short story. It could easily go without being a fanfiction but a wonderfully sinister and poetic tale. I wish I could describe how perfect this is a little more, but I simply don't know how. It was just...amazing. Once again an unforgettable reading experience.

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