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Review:morgana67 says:
Very intriguing chapter. I really have no idea at this moment in time who Helen's attackers could have been or why they set on her. I suppose there are various possibilities but I get the feeling that there is some vital information that you haven't released yet; which is good since it maintains the suspense.

I really like the fact that Helen can go from being very well spoken to actually very direct and also use the odd swearing word. I get a very good idea as to what she's like actually.

And Moody? Well, another very intriguing character I must say.

This story is very, very addictive.

Author's Response: Addictive? Ooh, I like the sound of that! It's fantastic to hear that you're enjoying the story that much. :D

One thing I'm trying to do in this story is work on keeping options open for the plot so that the reader has to guess at who's doing what or, more importantly, who's the "bad guy" causing all the problems (or is there more than one?). As plotting is my weak point, I'd love to be able to pull off some successful plot twists and suspenseful moments.

Helen has that mask-like facade of someone who's had to pretend she's someone else quite often, even before she left her family. She doesn't take her mask off to many people, if anyone, so that it happens in front of Moody is pretty significant. ;)

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate your reviews. ^_^

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